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1.  Do your research. Everyone can benefit from a little research.  I bet if Paolini had, he wouldn't have written Lord of the Star Wars Dragonriders of Pern.  Stephanie Meyer might have depicted Forks a little more accurately.  Odds are, the idea for your story is not as unique as you think.  Are there other stories out there like it?  How can you make yours different? (And saying "Because it's meeeeeeee!" doesn't count.  Boy, does it ever not.) Research can be anything from reading a vast swathe of YA to find out what's selling right now, to skimming Wikipedia articles for just how that piece of armor or weapon worked, to interviewing someone knowledgeable about a subject you want to include in your book.  Most of the time, if you tell people you're writing a book, they get really excited about being consulted about it.  And yes, that's a lot of reading.  Because if you're writing, or want to be a writer, you should already be reading.  A lot.  More than the average person.  I read about 3-5 (or more) novels a week when I'm idea hunting, and average about 1-2 when I'm not.  Writers who complain about having to read are oxymorons.  It's like a sniper saying he doesn't practice  shooting, or an equestrian complaining about horses.  Words and the craft of storytelling are your bread and butter: get used to it.  Or don't write. (Odds are, if you're not reading, you won't write well anyway.)  Reading everything and anything encompasses about 90% of your research.  Deconstruct your favorite books, why the scene works or the dialogue pops, why the author chose this word or that word.  It's research.  Do it.

2.  Keep a working journal. I'm sure I've mentioned before that the physical act of writing is stimulating in and of itself, and that I keep a text file and a working journal when I'm world and plot-building.  Having a physical journal is pretty indispensable.  I'm a horrible nerd, so my working journals have to look like they came out of or belong to the worlds I'm writing in.  My urban fantasy journal is a dark, black deal with gothic linework and gilt edges, and my steampunk Western is leather with an impressed design that just screams Old West and can be tied shut with the same kind of ties you find on a Western saddle.  Both of them were purchased at my local Barnes and Noble.  (My old high fantasy The Dragon Rose had heraldic flowers of gilt embossed on blue-black leather.)  It's inspiring and helpful, I think, to have such a thing, something that will hold the soul of the story.  Others might not care about that, and be perfectly happy with a spiral, or one of those little ones that can fit in your purse or pocket so you can whip it out when you get that idea.  A journal not only becomes a helpful tool for building the story, but it also becomes a working record of how you work.  It's pretty interesting to come back to notes that you ended with a question mark because you weren't sure it would work, and realize that right there was when you got the crux of the story.  I usually find it helpful to put a heading on my pages, a flip through of my Daemonfire journal revealed the following headings: Characters, Setting, Races, Musings, Flora and Fauna, notes on bo staff use, and Chapters.  Musings are my ideas that don't have a place yet, and Flora and Fauna are awesome to
just list things that grow or live in the area where the story takes place, and when you're caught describing things that might be around, you have a whole list to choose from.

3.  Have a closed door. When I was younger and still living with my folks, my computer was located in the playroom, a den-type area where a TV and video games were.  It had no door, and without fail, my mom would walk in with a chore right at the most exciting part of my writing.  "And with a mighty leap, the dragon spewed forth fire that threatened all of-" "Can you take out the trash?"  (I suspect it was impossible for her to walk by me at the keyboard and not think I was being lazy.)  To this day, I hate being  nterrupted when I'm writing.  My friends comment about me being in "novel mode", because I cloister myself so bad.  I don't answer the phone or even hear it ring, because I'm behind a closed door to concentrate.  And that's the whole point of it.  I am a writer because I write, not because I promise myself I will and then get distracted by the Internet or friends who want to hang out.  Stephen King points out that a closed door is a promise, a sign to the outside world that you intend to see this thing through.  Writing, at least the professional kind, is not a lark or a hobby.  The average novel takes a year to write, rewrite, and polish, let alone submit and get published, and many novels take even longer.  The closed door becomes especially important when the shine comes off the apple; usually about halfway or three-fourths of the way through the novel where you're tapped out and you just want it to end.  Make a closed door part of your habit and you might have an easier time seeing things
through.  Better yet, let folks know that when the door is closed, whatever they have can wait.

4. Stop whining and milking it. I really don't even know where to begin with this one, but man, it needs to be said.  Get into a room of writers (or better yet, wannabe writers), and you will hear every complaint in the book about why they can't find time to write.  Their job, they're tired, they have kids, they have social obligations, they think they're hacks, they just haven't found the time ... blah blah blah.  My immediate judgement?  Lazy.  Undisciplined.  And probably writing for the wrong reasons (or looking to commiserate, which is an admittedly favorite pastime of writers.)  You sleep for 8 hours, you work for 8 hours, that leaves a grand total of 40 hours a week for you to work on your writing.  And yeah, that includes that hour drive to and from work (I work on my stories all the time while I'm driving. And in the shower.  And while I'm waiting to fall asleep and doing my chores.)  Too many people complain and whinge about anything, and I'm astonished at the number of people who blog and forum post about it!  Those keystrokes could have been spent writing.  Don't tell me you get stuck at the keyboard when you've had all freaking day to figure out what you're going to write yet, or better yet, had the chance to scribble down so you can refer to it later.  Don't tell me you're "not feeling the muse" when everyone else from a doctor to a garbageman manages to drag themselves into doing what needs to be done for that day.  And most importantly, stop telling yourself you suck.  First of all, no one wants to hear it, and second of all, in a room full of writers, you've got your work cut out for you figuring out who feels the worst.  (Check out the suicide rates for artists versus everyone else.)  Agents, editors, and readers don't care how much you bleed out and cried and felt terrible.  They want a story, dammit.   Get to writing it!  At the risk of sounding pithy and trite, I'll give you one of the phrases hanging on my studio wall: "A negative attitude will corrode your creative landscape more surely than a torrent of criticism."

5. Set attainable goals. I know a lot of beginning writers have trouble with the whole self-discipline thing.  Hell, most non-writers fail miserably at it.  But I notice a particular pattern among people who want to write more.  They set these massive goals, like 10 or 20 pages a day, 2000 words a day, or some other goal that are really professional tier goals, fail to attain it, and then beat themselves up crying "Stupid!  Stupid!" all the while.  NaNoWriMos in particular are prone to this (I'm not sure if garroting oneself with an impossible deadline is a way to get good prose, but I probably write faster than most NaNos anyway, so I don't have to worry about it, ha ha!)  Really, it should be the other way around.  Set small goals for yourself.  One sentence a day.  Or a paragraph a day.  Pretty much anything a day, especially at the same time, is a good way to start building yourself a foundation for disciplined writing.  It ain't that hard, especially when you start combining it with the other rules.  You've done your research, given yourself a pep talk, now walk in, close the door, and write a sentence.  When you're done, reward yourself.  Repeat as needed.  Sooner or later you'll start feeling the flow, going further, getting into a character or a scene.  That just becomes the icing on the cake.  Because believe me, you're gonna need to feel good about yourself.  No one else is gonna do it for you, unless they're writers, too.  I dare you to say "A writer is a person who has written today" to a stranger and watch them blink and say "So you're published?"
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  • Listening to: Defying Gravity. Every version of it.
  • Reading: The Sable Quean
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:iconatlantathearistocrat:
AtlantaTheAristocrat Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sup, I need some help on finding good historical fiction set in 18th century. Most of the good one's I've heard off are set in the Regency period which is not what I'm looking for at all.
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Droemar Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
It's called Google. And possibly Amazon. You may want to look into that. :)
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AtlantaTheAristocrat Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ok, just wondering if you knew any good ones.
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nekofluffybutt Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011  Student General Artist
I do have trouble in getting started. I am having trouble with writing and I have good world(for now, I checked your 5 tips on it, I like things in there world to be relatble to this one with exceptions like magic and better advancements in technology) and the main party has no mary sues but I did want to ask you what to search for or look into, since I have next to no plot, I have events and problems and sometimes solutions but no plot. I generally can take a good critque in my drawing since I feel good about it but writing is a lot weaker so i don't think I could just let anyone come up and read my work, maybe for fun but thats about it. So anything I should look it. If you want I can send you a note about the chracters and world they live in, but tht's about all i got, all I know is they are unique and not... mary-sues so personal achiement hah! And yeah I have terrible spelling errors. It's late here ^^;
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I want to write a fantasy novella set in a highschool. I've been looking for books with a similar format but the obvious one staring me in the face is Twilight. Droemar please tell me I don't have to read Twilight.
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Droemar Featured By Owner May 21, 2011
Set n a high school? Sounds like urban fantasy! Twilight is paranormal romance. Try The Midnighters by Scott Westerfeld, anything by Holly Black, and if you're looking for just straight teenage high school experience, no fantasy, try Meg Cabot or anyone similar to hear.
Don't read Twilight! It's terrible in nearly every respect!
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Urban fantasy huh?! *takes notes* Yah I totes just went to my local childrens book store (oh how they love me in there) and asked for Holly Black (yay we were thinking the same thing) but all they had was a hard back and I was like "$17! To hell with furthering my education! Bitch gotta eat!"
I went for 'Eyes Like Stars' by Lisa Mantchev, 'City of Bones' by Cassandra Clare (averting my eyes from the 'Stephanie Myer loves this book' sticker on the cover), and in straight up YA literature I went for 'An Abundance of Katherines' by John Green... which I think it set as a road trip not a high school.. I just brought it because I love how John Green writes teens.
Can I just say that having you here on deviant art, as a resource for writing and drawing, it's been invaluable.
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Droemar Featured By Owner May 22, 2011
Well, you're welcome; I'm really glad to help out other aspiring writers. I've read City of Bones .... it's pretty bad, but admittedly not Twilight bad. It just comes too close for comfort. And there's very little high school featured in that one; mostly they run around the city at night.
Let me know how Eyes Like Stars and An Abundance of Katherines is.
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Update: Eyes Like Stars was annoying because i hate girls who flip-flop with love interests, Abundance of Kathrines (the first 5 pages) mentioned sex and blow jobs and then censored the f-word by saying 'fugging.' I think the censors should have gotten their priorities sorted. I returned it.
(You might have noticed by the space between replies I am a slow reader.)
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TheWingedShadow Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You know I love your journals. They help me a lot. There are some things at hownottowrite.com that also helped me but I think the guy is blathering too much lately. That's not helpful listnening to a procrastinator, because, thank you, I can procrastinate all alone, don't need your help on that. :D

I am writing since I was a kid but I never wrote anything serious. I have 2 worlds I have all fleshed out, with illustrations, maps, descriptions.
I have 3 major stories taking place in this worlds and I have notes, scraps of text, more scraps of text and a large pile of handwritten sheets from when I was 15. I actually made it to 754 handwritten pages.
But now I see it all as utter crap.

I started anew. And then once more. And then I shoved anything into the trash pile once more and started again.
My last start-a-new was 5 days ago. I have written 20 a4-pages since then and I'm glad with what I'm writing, to this day. Let's see how it develops.

Your journals help me to keep me sane, you know, as I see I'm not the only one with those many problems. Thank you for writing them.
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Droemar Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011
Little harsh on your old stuff, aren't you? ;) I keep everything I write, even the really bad stuff, just so I'm able to see how far I've come. It's easy to lose perspective on how much I've improved when I can't look behind me and see all the words that have led up to the piece of writing I'm working on now.
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Majnouna Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2011  Professional General Artist
Oh my god I also do that with the writing journal :XD: I make myself these small lightweight journals for Malaak (it's the same writing process up to the point where it takes on its final shape as a sequential rather than prose), lightweight and flat so I can keep them on me or slip them in my computer bag where nothing else will fit. I make a different cover color for each issue, and the first half is for general notes and shaping up the story, while from the center on (to find it easily) it's the final sequencing script from which I work from to sketch my layouts.
Back when I was writing a fantasy novel with the world building that involved, I made myself a really fancy-looking writing journal with a leather cover and different papers, it really looked like it had been mad eint hat world, hehe.
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prospice Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011
Nnnghh, I was all like "oh, neat!" until you decided to kinda-sorta bash on NaNos and decide that you most definitely write faster than all of us. And declare us as some sort of class separate from 'serious' writers. Why can't we draft in a month if we want to?

Well, I'm more of a "I'm gonna finish this durn first draft so that I can re-write it" sort of person anyway. I guess you, unlike me, are more obsessed with getting it right the first time. So, I mean, I can see how you'd not like NaNo... but, seriously, it may be an 'impossible' deadline, but it was seriously the best thing I ever did for my writing. Because I learned to cut the crap, stop obsessing over details, and live in pace with the story itself.

I do, however, keep a journal for my re-write. It is pretty and helps me get all these sci-fi things straight.
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tsuki20 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011
That was great thanks.

Defying Gravity is one of my faves.
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VanillaTwist Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2011
It was so refreshing to read this journal.
My main focus is horror, so my nose is always stuck in a Stephen King novel in my free time.
I always get a real buzz from writing, but sometimes it's pretty dang hard not to feel negative about your abilities.
I'll just have to work on blocking out that voice.
Thanks for the inspiration you've provided :D
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Aen-Riv Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011
Negative attitude and criticism may become an infinite loop of poor writing fro some.
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Droemar Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011
Best to remove the one you can control, says I!
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Aen-Riv Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011
And it becomes a question (or rather a big issue) of self-control, no?
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Droemar Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011
Haha, maybe I should do 5 Tips on that! Especially in a critique circle!
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Aen-Riv Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011
Whatever you decide to do, I'm sure it won't be a total waste of effort, hehe.
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OmniWitch Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011  Professional Writer
I once tried to set myself a goal of 6 pages a day. It took the entire day to write that 6 pages. I have no idea if I go at a snail's pace or not, but I've since limited it to three instead haha.
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KaxantheDragon Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Student General Artist
Synchronicity my friend. My mother has been reading (and thus reading to me parts of these books that struck her is awesome/fascinating/etc.) books that talk about just what you're saying. Especially the journal bit. I've always operated on "Slow and steady wins the race", almost to the point where I take it too literally. (Family calls me Moses. :XD: )

I've decided to do these little changes myself, cuz I'm bound and determined to make my talent and make something of it. Thanks so much for the time you take to help us little-guys-who-are-learning-to-become-big-guys.
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androidgirl Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2011
1. Wait, why can't an equestrian complain about horses? Complaining about your job is different from not performing your job. Just because an equestrian is complaining that his horse habitually bites him and steals his apples doesn't mean that he's not practicing riding it. (... Sorry. I'll stop being disagreeable and nitpicky.)

3. What if you have a pet cat that complains when locked in a room with you and her litterbox can only be in your bathroom? My cat can be pretty obnoxious and insistent.

4. ... I am so guilty of that... I have an addiction to video games and I am shocked at how webcomic artists find the time for job, sleep, work, webcomic stuff, AND video games on top of all that... Also, got any tips for overcoming writer's block?
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xflavoured-realityx Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2011
I think the last part is actually what I needed. I always tell myself how bad my work is, rather than listen to people who are actually telling me it's good. As a psychological effect, I then edit the same part again and again, rather than go further and if I'm not happy with it later on, then go back to it. I should set a target as well, just so I open the document and type. The days I don't type up some story, I get annoyed with myself because I had the time. The days I do, I then get annoyed because I don't think it's good. A habit I need to break, and I think this tutorial will help that :-)
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Lit-Twitter Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2011
Chirp, nice to see your tutorials again. It's been twittered. [link] :)
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kalany Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2011
My personal trick for writing is to make it part of my bedtime habit. I have between 20 minutes and an hour between when I take my bedtime medication and when it kicks in, and I use that time to write. I take my pen and a pad of paper and curl up in bed and write until I feel sleepy. Even if I'm feeling absolutely no inspiration, I write something. Anything. Even if it's utter dreck and drivel.

Most of what I write is utter dreck and drivel, so that's okay. It's all in the editing, baby.

Of course the downside to this method is that when the muse suddenly hits, I'll write 40 pages and get no sleep....
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Jaala Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011
:D your journals are informative and amusing as always!
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dehydromon Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is the most insightful bit on getting started I have ever read. I do have a question about what you said on number 3. Would you recommend simply putting my ear buds in, cranking up the music, and forgetting about the rest of the world, or would you consider music to be more of a distraction than a motivator? Do you listen to music while you write, or do you do it in absolute silence?
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Droemar Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011
I used to write to music, but I started to realize I focused better with it. At first, any music was fine, then it had to be music without lyrics, and then none at all ... but that's just for me. Stephen King listened to music at some point in his career; I'm not sure if he still does. But I'm sure there are plenty of writers out there who listen to music in order to write and "block" the world.
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WingSilk Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Student General Artist
This is *absolutely* what I need to hear. I'm definitely a writer who, of late, deliberates and stalls more than writes. I used to write loads, pages and even chapters per day, when I was younger. But somewhere around my early teens I started to get really self-conscious about quality, began expecting my first drafts to look like final drafts, and all these other negative mental things slowly dammed up that river. I really want that early way of writing back, and this journal was a good kick in the pants for me to just do it!
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Droemar Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011
I managed to get over that with the mantra "Writing is rewriting." Thank you, Jane Yolen!
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Uruboros Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Professional Writer
Great advice. I should keep better notes while reading other stuff and also I've been working on setting (and keeping) a goal for some time. Some days it's hard to find time to write, but I've been trying to work my way up to doing a chapter a week. It's still a difficult goal for me.
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Snaphance93 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Applause! Applause all around! I am such a person who simply cannot function without a notebook--I carry one with me at all times, I sleep with one under my pillow, and I would bring one into the shower if it wouldn't get wet. The ideas! If I'm actively working on a story (right now I have one novella waiting for a rewrite and a novel up for planning), I whip up my laptop on the bus to and from school and churn out between 3-500 words each way.

Research, too--honestly, that is where I get most of my ideas from. I swear I have more books on history and weapons and all those goodies than my local library. And it grates me to no end when I stumble upon someone who didn't do theirs properly.

So, yeah, I agree fully with this journal.
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Droemar Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011
Wow, that's awesome that you type on your laptop. I have to have a certain amount of quiet and lack of distraction in order to focus, so kudos for doing something I probably couldn't.
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Ydera Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011
I dare you to say “A writer is a person who has written today” to a stranger and watch them blink and say “So you’re published?”
Have you tried this? Because I doubt that would be their first reaction and now I'm dying to try it.

And I actually happened to be listening to Wicked songs- in particular Defying Gravity- at the moment. Good music really helps when you're trying to draw.
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Droemar Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011
I have said that, to people at SCBWI, no less (where everyone is supposed to be an aspiring writer.) Maybe if I said it to utter strangers my reaction might be a little different.
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Stepharuka Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have a site to recommend for #2 and #5: [link]

It is a writing site, and though it's most keyed towards personal journaling, you can use it to write about everything. It keeps track of your word count, it's completely private, and all of your writing is searchable. It doesn't *punish* you for not writing every day, per se, but if you DO write the required amount of words every day it keeps track of your streak, and you get cool little profile badges for maintaining one (I'm about 3 weeks away from the phoenix badge :la:). It would be perfect for someone who's at their computer a lot but needs some extra motivation to work on their story every day. You can even set it to send you daily reminder emails.
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Majnouna Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2011  Professional General Artist
Oh my! This is useful for ANY kind of writing! I have a bunch of things I need to finish that require writing and it can be hard to get into the mood (since it's not my main occupation), so I'm going to give this a try, thanks!
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Droemar Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011
Wow, that's a really good website for honing the old self-discipline. Awesome! I'll have to feature it in my next journal.
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raspil Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011   Writer
this.
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etoma Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Everyone can benefit from a little research. I bet if Paolini had, he wouldn’t have written Lord of the Star Wars Dragonriders of Pern.

I noticed that trifecta too- makes me wonder how he managed a publisher in the first place. I was also surprised when I read McCaffrey's praise on the back of his first book...

BUT: A page a day is good advice, something I can manage and I love research. Reading the Firebringer trilogy by Pierce is really helpful. Her language is lively.
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KreepingSpawn Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
:dummy:

*bumbles away happily to write*
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CaptainLupin90 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautifully said, dearie, beautifully said. I always try to set a small goal for myself when I write: at least one paragraph or a page, a day. If I get more done, good on me. If I don't, there's always the next day after work, before school, after school, etc... There's always time to write. :) Or at least, I try to set aside enough time for myself. :D
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Geko27 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011
*Although
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Geko27 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011
:D this is great! althou i have no intention of becoming a author this has helped me with other things that are related :D
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Droemar Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011
True enough. A lot of these rules apply to other projects, like art.
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Geko27 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2011
:nod:
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StormofThunder Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011
:iconclapplz: Brilliant. Just what I need, really. :lol:
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