Still plugging through those final character designs. I think this one is an improvement over the pencil sketch I did of Nick, insofar as he looks slightly less young. I think I had a bit of a problem with how young and innocent Nick is in the first book; every character is supposed to have a change. But I've come to the conclusion that Nick's big metamorphosis doesn't come until the second and third book. So he has it easy in the Bronze Key. Whaddya think?